Feedback pls

Hey, for my community studies class we were asked to do an assignment on any topic of our choice. I chose Homelessness. As part of the assignment we are to get feedback from an 'expert' or someone educated in the field and who better to ask than all you guys.

My assignment has taken the form of an essay on the homelesness issue in Australia and then a brochure outlining the services provided for the homeless in Adelaide.

I have outlined certain topics as: the myths of homelesness, the statistics of the homeless, I've covered streetkids/youth homelessness, homeless families and also the categories of homelessness- primary, secondary and tertiary.
Being only 17 myself, i have personalised the essay to show how what i have learned has affected, or really hit home for me. Especially the stats for youth homelesness.

So bearing all this in mind, if possible can i get some feedback on what i have done. Thanks heaps.

What year level are you doing Kellie, and when is the assignment due?

Sounds great, post it here if you want or a section of it and you might get some helpful reviews.